OUTLINE
Introduction: In my opinion, people need to be ready to share, caring and tolerant to be able to get along with other members in an extended family.
Body:
Firstly, being ready to share is the most important quality.
+ share housework
+ share feelings
Secondly, people should be caring to live in an extended family.
+ care for grandparents
+ care for parents and siblings
Thirdly, being tolerant is another necessary quality.
+ different people have various points of view -> learn to accept and value other members’ belief and behaviour
Conclusion:
In short, if people want to live happily in an extended family, they should be sharing, caring and tolerant.
USEFUL LANGUAGE
Ready to share
Sharing / tolerant/ caring
Firstly/ Secondly/ Thirdly
Sibling
Bonding
SAMPLE
In my opinion, people need to be ready to share, caring and tolerant to be able to get along with other members in an extended family. Firstly, being ready to share is the most important quality. There is usually a lot of housework in an extended family, so it is good to share housework with other members. Also, sharing feelings with other family members is necessary so that sadness or happiness can be reduced or increased. Secondly, people should be caring to live in an extended family. As they live with their grandparents, parents and siblings in the same family, it is necessary to care for these very close family members. This care can strengthen the love and bonding between family members. Thirdly, being tolerant is another necessary quality. Different people have various points of view, so members in an extended family should learn to accept and value other members' belief and behaviour. Only this can make them live happily together. In short, if people want to live happily in an extended family, they should be sharing, caring and tolerant.