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Problem: Pollution
- Air pollution: a lot of traffic jams and vehicles
- Noise pollution: vehicles and construction sites
- Water pollution: rubbish thrown into the water; waste from factories discharged into ponds and lakes
USEFUL LANGUAGE:
Firstly/ Secondly/ Next/ Lastly/ Finally/ The first… is…
populous/ polluted/ noisy
to affect/ to effect/ to cause/ to lead to
city dwellers/ residents
SAMPLE
There are some types of pollution that the city has to face. The first type of pollution is air pollution. Traffic jams and the large number of vehicles in the city make the air dirty and polluted. This may lead to respiratory diseases. Noise pollution is another type. The increase in vehicles on the roads and construction sites make the city noisy. This has bad effects on people's health. Finally, there is water pollution. A populous city has much rubbish which is then thrown into the water. Waste from factories is also discharged directly into ponds and lakes. Water pollution makes people sick. In short, these kinds of pollution bring about problems to all city dwellers.